“MY WILD LIFE AS VOLUNTEER ZOO GUIDE”
The name of the article that I choose is "my wild life as a zoo volunteer guide." I have Chosen this article because it contains a striking title about the animals which is a topic that is interesting for me and for many people.
The article is exactly the same than the newspaper form and has some information that is irrelevant to the contents, but this information is used by the writer to immerse the reader within the text with a wild life experience that thrill and that capture ones interest.
The titles idea is clear, the heading focus the topic that is been covered, in this case about work experience as a guide zoo, which would be very interesting for readers to know a little about this beautiful job and maybe many people wanted to get or to do some similar work.
This article does not use many subtitles and the only subtitle cited is not very clearly, it is no connected with the content and concept of the article.
Besides, the article does not begin with concise information about this, the first paragraphs does not show the main idea of the article, does not express basis points that allow focusing the topic of this article.
Paragraphs on the website are shorter than printed, making it more organized and easier to read; the paragraphs do not contain keywords, these should contain highlighted words that capture the attention of anyone reading this and to facilitate the approach of the idea that the writer wants to express.
The article contains information that is very specific and innovative and in addition incites people to work for the conservation of wildlife.
"We aim to engage the public in issues of wildlife conservation and encourage people to think about what they can do."
The article contain an image, is a concise picture that shows exactly what the article refers, is a good image, suitable for the text, but I think the images would attract and interest people read the article, so I recommend that to use two or three smaller but attractive images about the life of the zoo, the animals and the work of volunteers in the zoo. I think it's a good article, contains the most points that are required; the content is appropriate and innovative information.
In the newspaper, the article is very well distributed; perhaps the article on the Internet could work a little more about the distribution of the text.
Pictures and highlighted titles would be a good element to improve the presentation.
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